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旋元佑文法笔记——减化子句

10-28-2022

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在理解了名词子句、副词子句和关系子句后,我们就有了足够的前置知识来理解最后一种高级技巧:减化子句。因为子句本身是一个独立的句子,所以很多情况下都会有与主句重复的元素。这种技巧就是旨在尽可能地减少句子中的重复元素,以获得更简洁有力的表达。

在对子句做减化时,除了原本在副词子句中表达逻辑的逻辑词、或是在名词子句中被当作连接词的疑问词,其他的连接词都可以省略。子句本身一般会省略主词和 be 动词,仅留下补语。而语气助动词和普通动词则会被处理为不定词片语或分词片语,也就是词类转化,从而以更精简的方式表达原本由一个子句传递的信息。

我们会分别讨论名词子句、副词子句和关系子句的减化方式。由于各种子句的来源及结构有许多种不同的情况,而语言最优先的事情永远是清晰的表达,所以我们需要分情况讨论所有处理方式的细节。

名词子句的减化

名词子句的减化可以分为以下三种情况:

  1. 如果子句有 be 动词,那么需要省略 be 动词
  2. 如果有语气助动词,那么将其减化为不定词片语 to V
  3. 普通动词添加 -ing 词尾做词类变化

名词子句原本在主句中作为名词使用,而名词可以在句子中作为主词、受词、补语、同位格使用,属于不可删除的元素。所以减化后需要保持剩下部分的名词属性,如果不是,则需要做词类变化。总而言之,减化后的结果可能是动名词 Ving 或不定词片语 to V。

减化为动名词

如果子句中不存在语气助动词,那么通常的处理是将动词片语转化为动名词片语。而这个动名词片语将会承担减化前的名词子句原本承担的语法角色。所以我们需要从子句承担的角色的角度来分析减化。

子句主词如果与主句主词重复且无意义,那么通常会被省略。而当子句主词不重复且有意义时,就不可省略。

  1. That you don’t have a cell-phone can save you a great deal of trouble.
    • Not having a cell-phone can save you a great deal of trouble.
    • 名词子句做主句主词,主词一致,可省略主词
  2. The John was drunk is no excuse for the rude behavior.
    • John’s being drunk is no excuse for the rude behavior.
    • Being drunk is no excuse for John’s rude behavior.
    • 主词不一致,不可省略主词。动词片语变化为动名词
  3. I dislike that I am kept waiting.
    • I dislike being kept waiting.
    • 名词子句做受词。我们并不经常使用原始句型,而是直接使用减化后的句子
  4. The actor’s greatest achievement is that he has been nominated twice for the Oscar.
    • The actor’s greatest achievement is his having been nominated twice for the Oscar.
    • The actor’s greatest achievement is his two Oscar nominations.
    • 名词子句做补语。主词不一致不可省略
  5. I am happy that you won the prize.
    • I am happy about the fact that you won the prize.
    • I am happy about you winning the prize.
    • I am happy about your winning the prize.
    • 名词子句做同位格。原始句子中经常省略子句前的同位名词,需要做句子结构分析才能与其他类型的子句区分开
    • 还原句子后,按常规做法减化

减化为不定词片语

如果子句中存在语气助动词,那么我们会将其减化为不定词片语。而不定词片语具有名词、形容词和副词的功能,语法角色较为灵活。所以我们需要从名词子句的来源来分析减化。

来自直述句

直述句通过添加无意义的从属连接词 that,构成名词子句。这种子句如果包含语气助动词,则可以将其减化为不定词片语。

  1. It is important that one be honest.
    • It is important to be honest.
  2. That John should go on such a mission is suicide.
    • For John to go on such a mission is suicide.
    • 无法省略的主词可以借助 for 来解决语法冲突

有一类借助形式主词 it 而强调的句型为:it is … that …。在减化主词时,如果原句为褒贬义,则借助介系词 of 处理减化后的句子。原因在于 of 表达了一件已经完成的事的所属关系,完成的事情才能被评价。

  1. It is kind that you can say so.
    • It is kind of you to say so.
  2. It didn’t take much time that Richard could learn skiing well.
    • It didn’t take much time for Richard to learn skiing well.
    • It didn’t take Richard much time to learn skiing well.
    • 可以借助授予动词 take 将减化后的句子重构为 S + V + O + O 的句型
  3. I hope that I can get a raise next month.
    • I hope to get a raise next month.
    • 名词子句为受词
  4. The best plan is that we should wait.
    • The best plan is to wait.
  5. I expect that I will have finished this book by next weekend.
    • I expect to have finished this book by next weekend.
  6. It is a pity that we should have missed the show.
    • It is a pity to have missed the show.

来自疑问句

对于 information questions,保留连接词,而 Yes/No questions,则改写为 whether to V 的形式。

  1. I’ll tell you what you should do.
    • I’ll tell you what to do.
  2. Whether yo go on or not will have to be decided soon.

副词子句减化

副词子句只有在主句主词和子句主词一致时才可以省略,否则会造成 Dangling Modifiers。副词子句的减化方式与名词子句类似,所以不再赘述。区别在于副词子句的连接词表达了子句间的逻辑关系,所以需要具体分析是否可以省略。

副词子句的减化结果可能为分词片语、不定词片语、名词、形容词和介系词片语。

减化为分词构句

减化后的分词构句在句首,具有表达原因的功能。放在句尾,则具有表达结果的功能。

  1. Because he was itching to be playing again, the boy inserted more coins.

    • Itching to be playing again, the boy inserted more coins.
  2. Two Vietnamese patients died from avian flu, so that this caused widespread panic in Southeast Asia.

    • Two Vietnamese patients died from avian flu, causing widespread panic in Southeast Asia.
  3. After he wrote the letter, he put it to mail.

    • After writing the letter, he put it to mail.
  4. As it was rather late, the rescue workers decided to quit.

    • It being rather late, the rescue workers decided to quit.
    • be 动词如果省略,会使得 rather late 的角色不清晰
  5. After it was redecorated, the house looks more comfortable.

    • Redecorated, the house looks more comfortable.
    • After being redecorated, the house looks more comfortable.
    • After the redecoration, the house looks more comfortable.
    • 尽管过去分词具有被动暗示,但我们也可以借助 being 来突出被动式
  6. The case is closed now.

    • The case is being closed now.
    • 借助 being 是为了强调进行的状态,并进行词类变化
  7. After he has been a soldier for 10 years, the man is quite used to taking orders.

    • Having been a soldier for 10 years, the man is quite used to taking order.
    • 借助 having been 是为了强调完成的状态,并进行词类变化
  8. After it had been robbed five times, the store finally installed a security system.

    • After having been robbed five times, the store finally installed a security system.
    • 介系词受词须是名词类,且动词片语要暗示被动,所以只能对助动词做词类变化
  9. When he entered the classroom, the teacher greeted the students.

    • Entering the classroom, the teacher greeted the students.
  10. The teacher who entered the classroom greeted the students.

    • The teacher entering the classroom greeted the students.
    • The teacher, entering the classroom, greeted the students.
    • 居于句中的减化,如果不用逗号隔开,则具有指示作用。若隔开,则可能修饰动词或整个句子
  11. The teacher greeted the students entering the classroom.

    • 可能为关系子句的减化
  12. The teacher greeted the students, entering the classroom.

    • 可能为副词子句的减化

减化为不定词片语

当子句的动词片语由语气助动词构成,可将其减化为不定词片语。注意由于不定词片语可承担角色的多样性,在减化后语义清楚的前提下就可以进行省略,而不必介意主句子句主词是否一致的问题。

  1. The student studied hard (in order) to get a scholarship.
    • The student studied hard in order that he could get a scholarship.
  2. The boy left home early so as to be in time for the concert.
    • The boy left home early so that he could be in time for the concert.
  3. The air in the city is so polluted as to be dangerous to health.
    • The air in the city is so polluted that it may be dangerous to health.
  4. The candidate made such an effort as to be sure of success.
    • The candidate made such an effort that he should be sure of success.
    • so … that / so … as to 引导的减化子句配合形容词或副词使用,其中 so 是程度副词
    • such … as to 配合名词片语使用,such 是前位限定词

减化为介系词片语

由于介系词的来源不同,所以我们需要分情况讨论。

补语为介系词片语

如果副词子句本来就是用介系词片语当主词补语,那么减化后剩下的就是这个介系词片语。

  1. While he is on duty, the officer never drinks.
    • While on duty, the officer never drinks.
  2. If you are in doubt, look up the word in the dictionary.
    • If in doubt, look up the word in the dictionary.

连接词做介系词

因为副词子句的连接词可能同时兼任介系词的词性。所以当子句减化后,连接词就会自动转化为介系词。

  1. That man used to be a gangster before he joined the army.
    • That man used to be a gangster before joining the army.
    • 减化后动词片语转化为动名词片语。
  2. After he was nominated for the Oscar, the actor became highly sought after.
    • After being nominated for the Oscar, the actor became highly sought after.
    • After the nomination for the Oscar, the actor became highly sought after.
    • After the Oscar nomination, the actor became highly sought after.
    • 介系词后需要名词类,可以直接使用分词片语或做词类转化
  3. I have been very busy since I returned from Bali.
    • I have been very busy since returning from Bali.
  4. The fruit doesn’t turn red until it is completely ripe.
    • The fruit doesn’t turn red until being completely ripe.
  5. The man can’t find a job easily, for he has a criminal record.
    • The man can’t find a job easily, for having a criminal record.
  6. As I am a scientist, I believe in concrete facts only.
    • A scientist, I believe in concrete facts only.
    • 注意在意思清楚的前提下,也可直接省略连接词

连接词改写为介系词

在不产生歧义和曲解原意的基础上,可以将连接词改写为意思相近的介系词。

原意改写
although / thoughdespite / in spite of
虽然没有 … 时without …

下面是一些例子:

  1. he girl is determined to marry her boyfriend although her parents object strongly.
    • The girl is determined to marry her boyfriend despite her parents’ strong objection.
  2. The little resort town is crowded because there has been an influx of tourists.
    • The little resort town is crowded, with an influx of tourists.
  3. When she heard her child cry, the woman rushed into the bedroom.
    • On hearing her child cry, the woman rushed into the bedroom.
  4. If the river rises above the red line, the village nearby will be evacuated.
    • In case of the river rising above the red line, the village nearby will be evacuated.

减化为其他

如果副词子句本来就有 be 动词或其他连缀动词,且后面跟的主词补语时名词或形容词。那么减化后就只剩下那部分补语了。如果认为句子结构不清晰,可以借助 being 来强调结构。

  1. Although he is a famous professor, my friend is extremely naive in practical matters.
    • Although a famous professor, my friend is extremely naive in practical matters.
  2. When he was younger, the man could play mahjong for three days straight.
    • When younger, the man could play mahjong for three days straight.
    • Younger, the man could play mahjong for three days straight.
  3. I will do it alone, if that is necessary.
    • I will do it alone, if necessary.

关系子句减化

关系子句的减化方法与上两种子句一致。因为关系代名词是先行词的重复,所以关系子句减化后,原本的连接词,包括关系代名词、关系副词都不会被留下来。

如果子句不含语气助动词,那么将子句的动词片语转化为分词,作为形容词修饰主词。如果子句动词片语是语气助动词,则需要将其改为不定词片语。

减化为分词

当关系代名词是关系子句的主词时,我们可以将其减化为分词。

  1. The man who wants to see you is waiting outside.
    • The man wanting to see you is waiting outside.
  2. Anyone that has visited Bali once will want to return.
    • Anyone having visited Bali once will want to return.
  3. Do you know the girl who is sitting next to John?
    • Do you know the girl sitting next to John?
  4. Grapes that are grown in the Champagne area make the best wines.
    • Grapes grown in the Champagne area make the best wines.
    • 原本的关系子句具有指示作用。且减化后剩下过去分词片语,具有被动的暗示
  5. A student who has been trained at this school is guaranteed to excel in any exam.
    • A student having been trained at this school is guaranteed to excel in any exam.
    • A student trained at this school is guaranteed to excel in any exam.
    • 对于过去完成式,我们可以借助助动词 have,或过去分词自带的完成暗示

减化为复合形容词

当关系代名词是关系子句的主词时,我们可以将其减化为复合形容词。

关系子句是形容词类,处于先行词之后。而形容词只能出现在名词片语和补语中。所以我们可以将关系子句减化为一个复合形容词,然后像使用单一形容词那样使用它。

  1. “Big John” is a machine. + The machine drills tunnels.
    • “Big John” is a machine that drills tunnels.
    • “Big John” is a tunnel-drilling machine.
  2. That magazine is for women. + That magazine looks beautiful.
    • That magazine which looks beautiful is for women.
    • That beautiful-looking magazine is for women.
  3. I love these high peaks. + These high peaks are covered with snow.
    • I love these high peaks, which are covered with snow.
    • I love these high, snow-covered peaks.

减化为形容词

当关系代名词是关系子句的主词,且关系子句为 S + V + C 时,主词补语可能为名词或形容词。减化后就只剩补语成分了。注意到如果是名词,减化后的句子就是所谓的同位格

  1. A chimpanzee is an animal that is capable of some reason.
    • A chimpanzee is an animal capable of some reason.
  2. This movies features Tom Hanks, who is my favorite movie star.
    • This movies features Tom Hanks, my favorite movie star.

减化为不定词片语

当子句包含语气助动词,可将其减化为不定词片语。此时不必关心关系代名词是否为关系子句的主词,只要不曲解原意,就可进行减化。

  1. This is not the right thing which you should do.
    • This is not the right thing to do.
  2. If you like Cantonese food, I know just the place where you can go.
    • If you like Cantonese food, I know just the place to go.
  3. There’s still one more person we must notify.
    • There’s still one more person to notify.
  4. There’s still one more person who must be notified.
    • There’s still one more person to be notified.
    • 被动语态
  5. I’m looking for a motorcycle that my wife can ride.
    • I’m looking for a motorcycle for my wife to ride.
    • 使用 for 交代不定词片语的主词,否则会产生歧义
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